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The Noble Art

"ding ding"

By BrenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

part of me says to fight, to fight

and get in that final word

when it would be so much easier to say fuck it all

and take a dive in the third

part of me says to stay the course

make a stand, make myself heard

but then i just want to shrink in on myself

and take a dive in the third

parts of me says that it will get better

probably the parts that don’t hurt

gonna wait till i get hit with a good one

and take a dive in the third

part of me says to be steadfast and strong

or was that just something i heard?

i’m gonna brace myself, drop my guard

and take a dive in the third

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About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    I rarely fight back with arguments anymore, saps my mental energy and turns me into someone I don’t wanna be. Until I snap again! 😅

  • Omggg, I totally get how exhausting it gets trying to always fight. Loved your poem!

  • Absolutely get this....at this point, I'm walking, saying fuck it. Great job

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    Just the fatigue of the fight really comes across.

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    This packs a punch...sorry not sorry haha! Seriously...I love your pieces when you delve into deeply entrenched emotional woes and do it with a no-holds-barred manner that still has eloquence. Well done, Brenton!

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