THE NIGHT WINTER CLAIMED HER AUTUMN
When the season breaks, so does she.

The room
quakes
when Winter steps through it—
not in sound,
but in pressure,
as if the atmosphere
has been seized in a fist
and stripped of every lie
it ever held.
The couch,
the walls,
the quiet lamplight
feel suddenly too mortal
for what stands before them.
Autumn feels it first—
a bright shock in her ribs,
as if something buried inside her
recognized its sovereign
and cried out.
Winter moves closer—
and the world tilts.
A frost-breath grazes her jaw,
and her vision splits—
the room dissolving
into ash-gold,
ice-blue,
a world half dying,
half being born
in the same shivering exhale.
Winter touches her collarbone.
The universe
flares open.
Heat rushes up Autumn’s body—
sunlight forcing its way
through the last torn seam
of a storm—
violent,
radiant,
trembling,
the kind of warmth
that only exists
before it dies.
Her breath
shatters.
Winter watches—
slow, devastating—
as if reading scripture
in the tremor beneath her skin.
She never knew cold
could touch like this—
not as punishment,
but as promise.
Outside, wind tears leaves
from their branches—
a surrender written
in rapture.
Frost veins the glass
in silver sigils
that look like yielding.
Autumn releases a sound—
not a gasp,
not a sob—
something caught
between the two,
a moan,
a ruptured thing
forced from her
by the sheer magnitude
of being seen
too deeply
to stay
unchanged.
Winter’s fingers travel—
collarbone,
the fragile hush
of her chest—
a slow, claiming sweep
that makes Autumn’s pulse
buck against the touch,
before continuing downward
with a hunger so precise
it turns the room
white-hot
and trembling.
A flash—
sharp,
bright,
consuming—
as buried truths
are dragged upward
by a hand
that refuses to let her hide.
Break,
Winter whispers.
And
she
does.
Warmth spills from her
in unstoppable waves,
her secrets rising like embers
eager to be claimed.
She didn’t know
she’d been starving
for this kind of breaking.
Frost floods the room.
The world holds its breath
as the season
breaks
and remakes itself.
Autumn collapses
into stillness—
transfigured—
ecstasy settling through her bones
like a crown
of heat and ice.
In the hush that follows,
she understands:
Home was not warmth.
It was the cold
that knew her name.
She meets Winter’s eyes—
and sees her own.
Winter was never a visitor.
She was the woman
Autumn had always been becoming—
waiting at the far edge
of her fear.
Comments (1)
Such TALENTED utilization of imagery and personification within this work!📝💕