The Murder of daughter by their jealous son
How could this have happened. why did they not see ?

The Murder of daughter by their jealous son
She never cried in front of them
just folded towels with trembling hands
kept her voice polite and low
wore long sleeves, even in July
He was the golden boy they said
the one with charm and easy grins
but rage runs quiet in some homes
and fists can land like whispers do
She’d been the youngest, gentle, still
the one who brushed their mother’s hair
who baked the bread and cleaned the floors
who smiled too much for his liking
He’d slam the door and bruise her arm
call it games or temper flares
and no one asked or looked too hard
because bruises fade and girls lie
When she was gone, they found her room
a cardigan stiff with blood at the cuff
notes she wrote that no one read
photos where her eyes looked elsewhere
The coroner wrote it plain and cold
death by punches to the head
and I remember her silence loud
and the way she flinched at shadows
Mother lit a candle, slow
her hands too old to shake by then
said she always knew she’d lose the girl
but never guessed to what
And he stood quiet by the wall
not weeping, not ashamed
his fingers wrapped around a glass
as if it never happened
The police arrested him for his sister’s death
the mother never forgave him, not even on her last breath
So she and the family mourned the loss of two not one
They never mentioned the sons name again
for what the bastard had done.

About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️



Comments (2)
Heart-wrenching and brutally honest 💔🕯️. This poem doesn't just tell a story — it screams the silence too many endure behind closed doors. The imagery of trembling hands and flinching shadows stays with you 🖤👁️🗨️. A painful reminder of how ignoring the signs can cost lives. Rest in power to all the unheard daughters 🌹🕊️.
This left me speechless. The quiet terror between the lines, the unspoken truths—haunting and heartbreakingly real.