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The More You Learn

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By Andrew C McDonaldPublished 9 months ago 1 min read

Listen to parents and your teachers

Sunday church, itinerant preachers

Go to school, pay attention

Working nightly on retention

Learn and grow, study hard …

Tutors, study buddies, flash cards

Always more 0n the next page

Figure out what makes you rage

…. Problem is …

The more you learn the less you believe

What’s up the other sleeve?

Geography at least I can see myself

Math and chemistry on proven shelf

But history, the past… who really knows

Winners write the stories … And It Shows

Religion is always quite the quandary

Where we air the dirty laundry

Love thy neighbor and all mankind

Unless they worship at a different shrine

Is it real? Were they right?

Or did they just pick a fight?

Then philosophy rears it’s cloudy head

Deep questions which we ponder in bed

Am I real or just a figment?

Is our life determined by our pigment?

Nietzsche, Socrates, Marx, Homer

Let your fingers be the roamer

Well…, study, ask, but make up your own mind

My truth, your truth, it’s there to find

Stride forth on life’s stage

When the play ends… turn the page

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About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran8 months ago

    "Love thy neighbor and all mankind Unless they worship at a different shrine" This is the sad reality we live in. Loved your poem, King Andrew!

  • Marie381Uk 8 months ago

    Perfect poem ♦️♦️

  • JBaz9 months ago

    This turned inot a deeper poem than I first thought. Very well said Andrew.

  • Susan Fourtané 9 months ago

    The my truth, your truth line is so taken from the woke book. 😅 This period in Hittorf will be known as the involution of the human being.

  • Rohitha Lanka9 months ago

    Interesting!!!

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