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The Moon Proposed To Me!

I adore it when i look at the sky at night, outside of my dorm

By SharShinePublished 2 years ago 1 min read

One step out of my room,

a gentle cold breeze

embraced me tightly

why do i feel ecstatic?

Another step forward,

Twinkling luminous stars

virtually kissed the little

moon in my eye

How can i return?

when the moon proposed to me

with its waxing crescent ring?

so i run mile away

Only to shrink its grandeur,

fit within my grasp

Now, find me a way to

my room again

- SharShine

i basically explained how i would feel whenever i look at the sky at night outside of my dorm. The shiny stars kissed my pupil(little moon in my eye) I was mesmerized when the moon is in waxing crescent shape( looks like a proposal ring) and proposed to me, so i ran miles away to reduce the moon size(when we move far away, moon looks smaller) only to give a hug.

Hope someone read and like my poem!

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  • SharShine (Author)2 years ago

    very good job sharshine

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