The Moments That Make Up A Dull Day
Streams of Conscious
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Tick
Tock
Tick
Tock
How is it only twelve o'clock?
Tick
Tock
Shit
A stream of conscious?
How can the stream flow freely
Over concrete dams?
Tick
Tick
Boom
Breakโs over
Time's up
Back to punching
The clock
I should punch this clock
Throw my phone
In the reservoir
Snag a pickaxe
Break some concrete
Chip by chip
Chip
Chip
Chip
Maybe then
The thoughts will flow
Like sweat pooling
After each strike
Until cracks (f-o-r-m)
And the dam b
r
e
a
k
s
Their warden smashed
Thoughts flow wild
Drip
Drip
Drip
..........The reservoir empties.......
.................And Iโm left................
Standing in the morass
.....................Of mud...................
...................And slug...................
................Remnants.................
............Waiting..........................
............................for a...............
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Drop
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(Ooo look a Doggo!)
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About the Creator
Matthew J. Fromm
Full-time nerd, history enthusiast, and proprietor of arcane knowledge.
Here there be dragons, knights, castles, and quests (plus the occasional dose of absurdity).
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Comments (10)
Well this is FANTASTIC
Relatable poem. I laughed at the end. Well done on your poem.
That last made me proper smile.
Saying to everyone : Stay healthy... Try to be relax and happy...! Congrats on TOP story..!
I enjoyed the fragmentation, since it sounds very much like a typical day at my desk. Especially the doggo! Well done, Matthew!
Very clever and relatable, my pal!
Hey that was cool! I like how it was visually like a waterfall of thoughts for a stream of consciousness ๐
Clever piece of poetry
That was so creatively woven. Very nicely done.
Haha, the ending was perfect. Interesting format. It created a nice effect for the chosen stream of thought.