The Mercenary Lantern
The ancient, everyday war
This is the ancient, primeval war.
This is the conflict of daytime and nighttime, darkness and light.
Morning salvo launched as sunrise strikes the night
The field of battle bathed in the day's blaze.
The struggle resumed as dusk seizes the sun,
dragging it down under quicksand ink.
Enlisted into perpetual strife,
bound to battle as a manufactured mercenary.
The lantern dozes in the dazzle of daylight where
only splinter cells of shadows can hide and plot
the twilight's rise, the day's demise.
As dusk darkens, your sanguine, saffron comfort awakens
beckoning all with your lemon-light beacon.
Drowning your deadly disguise,
your fatal filament electrifies
a lumen lance into a charge,
and the soft sludge of evening is pierced through.
This street corner alight in a golden glow of victory.
The lantern binds the blackness, claiming the small battlefield
awaiting the return of the sovereign sol.
Darkness left to circle and hiss, held in the periphery
around the lantern's poisonous phosphorescence.
Waiting for the moments before dawn
when the sun is still hidden and the lantern's power is cut
tar-black pitch swarms and the lantern lies slain.
The killing shade's tepid triumph.
Creeping vengeance as the sun pushes back the amber lid
from its glowing horizon coffin, rising to raze the midnight prince.
The sun king regains the timeless throne
The assassin lantern sleeps.
Waiting to lift its electric lance of light
and charge again into the primordial fight.
About the Creator
John R. Godwin
Sifting daily through the clutter of my mind trying to create something beautiful.
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Outstanding
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Compelling and original writing
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Comments (6)
Amazing word choice!!
Congratulations on winning Runner-up! That's awesome! You really brought this streetlight to life. Turning something we walk past every day into this epic warrior caught in an eternal battle. I love how you made us see it differently, like it's got its own story and purpose beyond just lighting up the sidewalk.
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! ๐๐๐๐๐๐
Congratulations on your runner up achievement!
There are so many lines here that I like, but probably this is my favorite: "only splinter cells of shadows can hide and plot the twilight's rise" It's so beautifully written, with such authenticity! I think I read it like three times.
Such powerful imagery. The whole piece feels epic and mythic.