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The Man Who Refused to Surrender

When failure bruised his soul, nature whispered him forward

By MS PulsePublished 5 months ago 1 min read

"I have failed more times than I can count, yet every river, tree, and dawn reminded me to rise again. This poem is a reflection of pain, persistence, and the quiet hope nature breathes into a broken soul."

I have stumbled so often
that failure knows my name.
It sat beside me in dark rooms,
mocking the dreams I once carried like fire.
There were nights I nearly believed
I was built only to collapse.

But then—
the river moved,
its restless song louder than my doubt.
Mountains stood tall,
their faces carved by storms fiercer than mine.
The sky bled colors at dawn,
as if to remind me
that endings can also glow.

I began to listen:
to leaves whispering patience,
to roots gripping the earth,
to birds rising even after long nights of silence.

Every piece of nature
stitched itself into my wounds.
And slowly, I understood—
I am not my failures,
I am the man still walking.
Hope lives inside my ribs,
and until my last breath,
I will not surrender.

inspirational

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  • MS Pulse (Author)5 months ago

    Dreams do not work unless you do.... Carry on and never give up

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