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The Man in the Hall

He looks like....

By a.a.gallagherPublished 5 years ago 1 min read
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Clink of glass

Clatter of plate

Coals burn brightly

In the grate.

*

Mummy, who’s that man?

He’s in the hall”

The small voice calls

above the din.

*

Mummy, who’s that man?”

“Something to eat?”

“A sandwich or an ice?’

‘The ham is really very nice”.

*

Mummy, who’s that man in the hall?

He’s wearing a long brown dress.”

Aunts and Uncles trail in;

Sad and distressed.

*

The service finished,

Burial over

The wake begins.

*

Ambivalent about the sad release

They stand and share

Grandpa stories.

*

A secret no less

But in the Will;

And except for two,

No one knew his last request.

*

His wish to be buried

Laid to rest ,

Dressed,

In the habit

Of the lay Franciscan.

*

Mummy, who’s that man in the hall?”

“Grey haired and pale ,

He looks like Grandpa!”

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157 words

surreal poetry

About the Creator

a.a.gallagher

Thank you for reading my words and for following me. I am a collector of stories. I also write to try and explain life's happenings to myself. I write poems about the environment, climate change plus fun rhymes aimed at young kids.

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  • Sam Spinelli2 months ago

    Oof— this hits hard. Beautifully told, despite the painful subject

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