
My eyes saw black and white pages,
But when I explored you,
I hold my breath!
You are like a jungle,
I got woods and built my house.
You are like a hospital,
I got my healing.
You are like a river,
That washed my dirt away.
You are like a spring,
I drank and my thirst was no more.
You are like a shopping mall,
I shopped and poverty has gone,
You are like a teacher,
My ignorance has gone.
You are like a solon,
My beauty was restored.
You are like a workshop,
My damaged parts are fixed.
O you the Source of my Life!
End//...
About the Creator
Irene Mugang Narewec
I got inspired and motivated by other people's work. Their books and teachings molded me to become a leader and agent of change. Am here to give back to the world.
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Comments (6)
WOW! That was very Beautiful & inspiring Irene! πΈ
Excellent πππ
Beautiful! I love it! Best!
Oh my friend, what a creation. It made me pause... and smile... and feel the need for a new good book! Well done!
Fabulous!!!
Superb π