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the lover gone amiss— a poem by danika

the one that got away

By danika poonPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

it wasn’t goodbye

when i slid out from under your arms

engulfed in your grey hoodie

that smelled just like you,

all warm and love

it wasn’t goodbye

when i leaned close enough to you

that i could feel

the heat that emanated off your skin,

and pressed my chapped lips against your forehead

it wasn’t goodbye

when your hands found their place

on my waist

a drowsy smile on your lips

before pulling me towards you

and burying your face in the crook of my neck

when you asked me

to stay

five more minutes

you mumbled,

voice hoarse and sending sparks

down my spine

it wasn’t goodbye when you pressed me

against the cold of the door

it wasn’t goodbye when your lips

descended onto mine

it wasn’t goodbye when i left,

it wasn’t goodbye

it wasn’t goodbye

it wasn’t goodbye—i didn’t know

it was goodbye.

heartbreak

About the Creator

danika poon

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