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The Loop

All it took was a rejection

By Don Anderson IIPublished 6 years ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Photo by Aliyah Jamous on Unsplash

And then I saw it... I saw the loneliness in his eyes, the unbridled rage that's waiting to break out, the love that he wants but knows that he can't have, the passion he feels but doesn't know what to do with it no matter what he does.

I've seen him walking around with nothing to say his whole life and he tries the best he can but he always gets shit back...

It was all full circle, nothing but a loop, the kind that Tom Cruise was stuck in in Edge of Tomorrow so the best he had to do to change that was to break it and he went his way instead without anyone with him

heartbreak

About the Creator

Don Anderson II

Graduate of community college and university

Now I'm just like everyone else, I work but I also dream

I write about almost everything or at least try to

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  • T. Lichtabout a year ago

    love that Tom Cruise example...

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