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The Legend of Lord Vesuvius

4 haiku series

By Abby Kay MendoncaPublished 3 years ago โ€ข 1 min read
The Legend of Lord Vesuvius
Photo by Tomas Sobek on Unsplash

Fire:

Lava hardened streets

fell victim to the wrath of

Lord Vesuvius.

Air:

Formerly His gift,

He turned air, with each breath -in-

to a horrid curse.

Earth:

As their feet struck earth,

to flee his feelings, Lord V.

flung ash, at Pompeii.

Water:

Women clung to sons,

and grown men wept, but Lord V.

never learned to cry.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Abby Kay Mendonca

Here to share my voice. I write about the overstated and underappreciated. Also, I love cats.

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  • Test3 years ago

    Abby I love your imagery in these Haikus (Haiku?.. Which is the pleural for it?). I love the play on the four elements and the intensity of the chaos you describe in this poem! Nicely done!

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