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The Last Goodbye

Over before it began

By Marie381Uk Published 11 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Last Goodbye

The Last Goodbye, The First Kiss

We stood in the doorway, silent, still,

hearts too heavy, hands too chill.

The weight of leaving, thick as air,

a moment stretched, a vacant stare.

Your fingers loosened , mine stayed tight,

holding back what wasn’t right.

No words left, no space for more,

just the echo of the closing door.

But once, beneath a sky so wide,

you brushed my lips and turned the tide.

A first kiss, a spark, a start,

before we learned to break a heart.

And so we part, as strangers do,

with memories caught in shades of blue.

The last goodbye, the first embrace,

both lost now, time won’t replace.

Too young to know, a romance song.

We both let go, neither strong.

Memories of that night remain,

You moved on and I remained.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham11 months ago

    This is such a sad poem to me of learning to let go of whomever. Good job.

  • What a poem 🙏

  • Marie , my eyes are pouring out tears. Wow . A tear jerker.

  • Rohitha Lanka11 months ago

    This was a good poem, but it was so sadddddd :(

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