the keys to love
you and I, make we
By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 3 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Julian Hochgesang on Unsplash
fast
hot
and bold
the way you love me
a slow
sure
burn
that make us, we
a path
few walk
held by the fire
a life of love, and we, the key
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (3)
"Fast, hot, bold, the way you love me." I like the poem a lot, but is there a message in this concerning something happening prematurely? Asking for a friend, lol.
I really loved your rhyme scheme here! Wonderful poem!
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