The Intruders.
One Day For The Owner.

I was praying past the hour
when drowsy eyelids bargained with sleep
and the room, smug with silence,
decided to get crowded.
Two guests slipped in without knocking
clumsy in their stealth
tiptoeing like amateurs
who think the dark will cover bad manners.
One leaned close as though to gift me something
right into my nose of all places
which is no holy doorway.
So I grabbed their cord
whatever contraption tethered them
as if Heaven had wired the trap itself.
They pushed my face forward
as if a sofa were a throne
and I, unwilling Queen, must not look upon them.
But fear leaked from their grip
and I drank it gladly.
My words fell like stones
The Lord judge you
The Lord judge you
until panic made them slippery.
A whisper within said
Let them go now.
So I did
and they scrambled for the exit
with the grace of startled pigeons.
One collided with the wall
a thump so loud
even the angels chuckled.
Then the house exhaled
oil glistened on doorframes
and peace slipped back in,
like an old friend returning from the kitchen
with nothing in its hands but quiet.
About the Creator
Cathy (Christine Acheini) Ben-Ameh.
https://linktr.ee/cathybenameh
Passionate blogger sharing insights on lifestyle, music and personal growth.
⭐Shortlisted on The Creative Future Writers Awards 2025.


Comments (5)
The sense of vulnerability and surreal phenomenon that happens only at night. I took in your poem and remembered the times it's happened to me.
Yikes! Clever psychological horror! Well done, Cathy!
Clever writing. I hope this isn't a true story. Everything okay?
I especially loved the ending. So wonderful!
Great poem, Cathy. I like how you put it all together.