The Intermediary Thief
Annual Self-taught Silent One
It crept while I slept
Familiar descent on tiptoe
I knew would leave
but hoped would linger
just one more day
This shift
against which an entire planet kneels
Resignation letters to follow
And me…
cracking battered chest wide
not of gold
but of cold
shakes out woollen scarves and hats
gloves
thickest socks and thermals
locked months in musty time-outs
Such unrepentant sinners
joyous
now that skies darken early
and rustic winds
beckon gusts from Arctic north
and howls shriek ominous glee
soon uncaged
ready for solstice rule
And yes
I can hear it
Warm air may carry sound faster
but cold carries it farther
denser harder
deeper
Yes
I see it
adjacent to an un-orchestrated cold and flu virus free-for-all
Please…
just one more day
of last yellow-browning leaves
loath to
relinquish barest branches
Evidence of nature’s final defiance—mine too
—unless degrees fall
and can’t get back up
Therefore
I long after leaf
like a lover
with check-ins twice an hour
(double on weekends)
to feed a futile reassurance
It
will
let go
in irreverent isolation
when I’m not paying attention
yet its release
will pierce my throat
And oxygen
it wrought without rest to produce
noisily swirls grief
in these lungs
Honors a faithful photosynthesizer
‘til death did them
Aware that meteorological destiny
metes no favor
but
there’s no small mercy in
those sunset brushstrokes
more vibrant-clad reddish-purple hues
the firewood smoke's unmistakable slither across night skies
Closure sneaks comfort’s scent
near spiced apple dumplings
on outdoor flame
Its bubbles a protest
over forecast freeze
as one more day
slips away
and
while you slept…
in it crept
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Comments (10)
Your poem has such a strong flow to it, the rhythm kept carrying me to next line and the next. I noticed I was even holding my breath. Congrats on your placement on the challenge! 🎉Well deserved.
I just dove right into this poem and enjoyed every line. Really beautiful line breaks and language. Too many phrases I want to note, but "...to feed a futile reassurance..." has to be mentioned because it sings. Congratulations on the win. Very well deserved.
Dani, what an outstanding poem! This part will stick with me for a while: "I can hear it Warm air may carry sound faster but cold carries it farther denser harder deeper" Congratulations on your win❣👏🥳
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
This has such beautiful imagery!
I loved the line "This shift against which an entire planet kneels" It held so much power!
Your imagery is incredible. I felt the season change right along with you. That longing for “just one more day” is so relatable. Beautiful work.
"Warm air may carry sound faster but cold carries it farther" Oooo, those lines were so deep. I wish I could have spiced apple dumplings now hehehehe. Loved your poem!
This was magnificent! I loved the internal rhythm and the way the words flowed so naturally. Great poetry!
No matter how we fight it, winter comes every year. Beautifully written, you captured the frosty creep of winter's approach perfectly. 👏👏❄️