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The Intermediary Thief

Annual Self-taught Silent One

By The Dani WriterPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in The Sound of First Frost Challenge
The Intermediary Thief
Photo by Yuri Antonenko on Unsplash

It crept while I slept

Familiar descent on tiptoe

I knew would leave

but hoped would linger

just one more day

This shift

against which an entire planet kneels

Resignation letters to follow

And me…

cracking battered chest wide

not of gold

but of cold

shakes out woollen scarves and hats

gloves

thickest socks and thermals

locked months in musty time-outs

Such unrepentant sinners

joyous

now that skies darken early

and rustic winds

beckon gusts from Arctic north

and howls shriek ominous glee

soon uncaged

ready for solstice rule

And yes

I can hear it

Warm air may carry sound faster

but cold carries it farther

denser harder

deeper

Yes

I see it

adjacent to an un-orchestrated cold and flu virus free-for-all

Please…

just one more day

of last yellow-browning leaves

loath to

relinquish barest branches

Evidence of nature’s final defiance—mine too

—unless degrees fall

and can’t get back up

Therefore

I long after leaf

like a lover

with check-ins twice an hour

(double on weekends)

to feed a futile reassurance

It

will

let go

in irreverent isolation

when I’m not paying attention

yet its release

will pierce my throat

And oxygen

it wrought without rest to produce

noisily swirls grief

in these lungs

Honors a faithful photosynthesizer

‘til death did them

Aware that meteorological destiny

metes no favor

but

there’s no small mercy in

those sunset brushstrokes

more vibrant-clad reddish-purple hues

the firewood smoke's unmistakable slither across night skies

Closure sneaks comfort’s scent

near spiced apple dumplings

on outdoor flame

Its bubbles a protest

over forecast freeze

as one more day

slips away

and

while you slept…

in it crept

By Yuri Antonenko on Unsplash

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The Dani Writer

Explores words to create worlds with poetry, nonfiction, and fiction. Writes content that permeates then revises and edits the heck out of it. Interests: Freelance, consultations, networking, rulebook-ripping. UK-based

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  • Imola Tóth29 days ago

    Your poem has such a strong flow to it, the rhythm kept carrying me to next line and the next. I noticed I was even holding my breath. Congrats on your placement on the challenge! 🎉Well deserved.

  • John R. Godwin2 months ago

    I just dove right into this poem and enjoyed every line. Really beautiful line breaks and language. Too many phrases I want to note, but "...to feed a futile reassurance..." has to be mentioned because it sings. Congratulations on the win. Very well deserved.

  • Marilyn Glover2 months ago

    Dani, what an outstanding poem! This part will stick with me for a while: "I can hear it Warm air may carry sound faster but cold carries it farther denser harder deeper" Congratulations on your win❣👏🥳

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Sara Wilson2 months ago

    This has such beautiful imagery!

  • Kera Hollow2 months ago

    I loved the line "This shift against which an entire planet kneels" It held so much power!

  • Sandy Gillman2 months ago

    Your imagery is incredible. I felt the season change right along with you. That longing for “just one more day” is so relatable. Beautiful work.

  • "Warm air may carry sound faster but cold carries it farther" Oooo, those lines were so deep. I wish I could have spiced apple dumplings now hehehehe. Loved your poem!

  • Silver Daux2 months ago

    This was magnificent! I loved the internal rhythm and the way the words flowed so naturally. Great poetry!

  • K.B. Silver 2 months ago

    No matter how we fight it, winter comes every year. Beautifully written, you captured the frosty creep of winter's approach perfectly. 👏👏❄️

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