
The idiot house is mad, it spins, it claws,
its chicken legs tramp rust and splintered bone.
The wheel keeps turning, careless of all laws,
its spokes cast shadows lunatic and lone.
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The hearth beyond—a false sun coughing flame—
spits fevered light across the junkyard floor.
It cares not who can hold, who breaks, who’s maimed,
the dance goes on, devours forevermore.
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Yet I am forged of that same filthy fire,
a spark that spat back bile at its own Sire.
My soul was wired to claw through every wall,
to reach beyond, though reaching means to fall.
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But here I choke, gagged sterile by their law—
I spit red laughter on the cage I gnaw.
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About the Creator
Iris Obscura
Do I come across as crass?
Do you find me base?
Am I an intellectual?
Or an effed-up idiot savant spewing nonsense, like... *beep*
Is this even funny?
I suppose not. But, then again, why not?
Read on...
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Comments (3)
This was such a unique, raw and vivid take on a soonet. Very you, very well done. I need to check back to read more of your most recent stuff. Well done, Iris. Also here is a message I've been dropping for relevant people - Hi, hope you are well? Wanted to remind you of the book and ask you to look at the most recent piece and update on progress and the next step involving your input - a bio. Thanks. https://shopping-feedback.today/writers/vocal-poetry-anthology-progress-update-and-requests-part-two%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
Oooo, red laughter, I especially loved that!
Damn! I feel like that last line these days... Stunning photo!