The House, the Hoarder, and the Rats
The sadness and death inside

The House, the Hoarder, and the Rats
He never left the hallway light on
just the glow of an old TV
where voices bled into silence
and silence was always louder
Windows sealed with cardboard sheets
the kind that softened in the rain
he stuffed the gaps with rags and bags
then stood back, proud of the patchwork
You’d smell the place before you saw it
sour, warm, heavy as a secret
no one knocked twice
no one looked too long
He named them all, the little ones
nibbling under cupboard doors
left bowls of pasta by the fridge
cracked open tins for special guests
The rats came bold by wintertime
no longer crept, just walked and claimed
they nested in his dressing gown
and curled beside his boots at night
He told the boy from Social Services
they were his last real friends
said they listened when he spoke
and never asked for money
His sister came one Christmas Eve
stood outside with binbags
a scarf around her angry face
and grief beneath her gloves
She didn’t step beyond the path
just stared into the dark
he never came to meet her there
she left without a word
They found him weeks beyond the thaw
one hand resting on a broken broom
his eyes still open, one rat near
the only one that didn’t run
No flowers came, no prayers were said
just masks and gloves and quick disgust
they emptied out his life in skips
and burned the rest at council cost
The house is gone, a bare grey plot
the neighbours say it’s better now
but sometimes late, the cats act strange
and no one parks along that side

About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️



Comments (1)
"You’d smell the place before you saw it sour, warm, heavy as a secret" sounds like a great place to live!!