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The Hollow Hour

A Villanelle of Obsession

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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The clock strikes midnight in my fevered brain,

And still I see your shadow on the stair;

Each breath I draw is tangled up in pain.

I walk these rooms like one who has been slain,

My ghost condemns me, follows everywhere.

The clock strikes midnight in my fevered brain.

The wallpaper hums low your lost refrain,

Your laughter shivers through the empty air;

Each breath I draw is tangled up in pain.

I clutch at phantoms, but they won’t remain,

They slip through fingers, weightless as despair.

The clock strikes midnight in my fevered brain.

The candles gutter, casting shapes profane,

Your face in wax and flame a cold nightmare.

Each breath I draw is tangled up in pain.

I cannot wake, nor can I break the chain

This house, this heart, this darkness I must bear.

The clock strikes midnight in my fevered

Villanelle

About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • C. Rommial Butler2 months ago

    Well-wrought! This evokes the manic nature of obsession well.

  • This one fits the challenge prompt perfectly. I admire the very clear story it carries. I think it’s my favorite in this challenge so far.

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