The Haunting Of Car 17 - Enter the Would-Be Hero
Part Six: Collaboration With Kelli

Part One by Kelli:
Part Two by me:
Part Three by Kelli:
Part Four by me:
Part Five by Kelli:
Part Six:
The railroad commissioner installs a concertina wire fence
To block easy exploration, but it created a mysterious riddle
Alas, all the railways could come up with was a weak defence
Instead, victims would always be led astray by a devilish fiddle
Cutting the chainlinks, they’d ignore the yellow warning signs
Entering the haunted woods, they’d search out the train wreck
Once they find the site, they will never leave the cursed pines
Immortal damnation is their eternal reward for their curious trek
With each new soul claimed, the engineer tolls the engine’s bell
With a lascivious look, the conductor punches each fresh ticket
Demonically possessing everyone, leaving no one alive to tell
A putrid graveyard of rotting corpses lying in the dense thicket
The phantoms wail, hoping the innocent will answer their call
Lucifer’s presence felt upon the wind, whispering lies in ears
The portal is fully open, demons ready for an apocalyptic fall
A damned county’s people pracitically beaten and nearing tears
Electrically charged, riding the lightning, another portal appears
Standing in the storm, a blazing, lone figure rose against the evil
With knowledge of the arcane, giving hope to lift the people’s fears
Both forces, unholy wraith and holy exorcist, from an era that’s primeval
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Part Seven Coming Soon??



Comments (4)
Oooo, a blazing hero? That's so cool! Can't wait to see what's in store!
Yeah, my brothers would all be toast. So would I, lol. (Curiosity didn't just kill the cat.)
I love this. I’ll take damnation if I can be an immortal! Also I like the word lascivious! ♥️ and there’s always a lone figure standing against Evil! Most people aren’t brave enough. Arcane magic is awesome! 😍
Putting a new spin…. Love it