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The Haunting Of Car 17 - Enter the Would-Be Hero

Part Six: Collaboration With Kelli

By Mother CombsPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
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Part One by Kelli:

Part Two by me:

Part Three by Kelli:

Part Four by me:

Part Five by Kelli:

Part Six:

The railroad commissioner installs a concertina wire fence

To block easy exploration, but it created a mysterious riddle

Alas, all the railways could come up with was a weak defence

Instead, victims would always be led astray by a devilish fiddle

Cutting the chainlinks, they’d ignore the yellow warning signs

Entering the haunted woods, they’d search out the train wreck

Once they find the site, they will never leave the cursed pines

Immortal damnation is their eternal reward for their curious trek

With each new soul claimed, the engineer tolls the engine’s bell

With a lascivious look, the conductor punches each fresh ticket

Demonically possessing everyone, leaving no one alive to tell

A putrid graveyard of rotting corpses lying in the dense thicket

The phantoms wail, hoping the innocent will answer their call

Lucifer’s presence felt upon the wind, whispering lies in ears

The portal is fully open, demons ready for an apocalyptic fall

A damned county’s people pracitically beaten and nearing tears

Electrically charged, riding the lightning, another portal appears

Standing in the storm, a blazing, lone figure rose against the evil

With knowledge of the arcane, giving hope to lift the people’s fears

Both forces, unholy wraith and holy exorcist, from an era that’s primeval

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Part Seven Coming Soon??

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Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran10 months ago

    Oooo, a blazing hero? That's so cool! Can't wait to see what's in store!

  • Yeah, my brothers would all be toast. So would I, lol. (Curiosity didn't just kill the cat.)

  • Alex H Mittelman 10 months ago

    I love this. I’ll take damnation if I can be an immortal! Also I like the word lascivious! ♥️ and there’s always a lone figure standing against Evil! Most people aren’t brave enough. Arcane magic is awesome! 😍

  • Putting a new spin…. Love it

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