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The Haunting of Car 17 - Avatar's War

Part 8 - Collaboration with Kelli🌹

By Mother CombsPublished 10 months ago • 1 min read
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Hear the hellish train whistle and heavenly bells ring out

While the demonic hosts and the angelic-sent being fight

Their phantasmic battle bringing about an acrid drought

Pitching the land into darkness, robbing the world of the light

Pulsating orbs of eldritch light thrown in a supernatural war

Neither side caring about what they lay waste to

The holy and the unholy, both claiming souls in their wake

With each soul they take, both sides become something new

Growing bigger and larger with everything that they take

They continually feed the portals, giving them vigor

Electric rains down from the clouds, striking the train all around

Abaddon’s minions and Seraphim’s Avatar, apocalyptic trigger

From portal to portal, an earthquake soon shocks the ground

The wails of the wraiths blend with the tolling bells

While the static charge of unearthly battle convulses borders

The valley emitting the most toxic, putrid of fetid smells

Each entity makes sure to follow their commanders' orders

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Part Nine Coming Soon???

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Part One by Kelli:

Part Two by me:

Part Three by Kelli:

Part Four by me:

Part Five by Kelli:

Part Six by me:

Part Seven by Kelli:

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About the Creator

Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran10 months ago

    Ewww, I can imagine that smell! Waiting for the next part hehehe

  • Score round 1 even.

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