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The Glimpse of the Tattered Man

(Indefinable Sonnet)

By Scott A. VancilPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in The Sonnet of Shadows Challenge
Photo by Scott A. Vancil

Within the mirror hides a darker shade

That rips my ‘sol’ into the prison’s glass.

Is this the man she loved? Or did he fade?

I wonder as each grain of sand doth pass.

I’ve mem’ry spent in Man Within My Coil,

But fading as the tiring winter light.

I love him less than she; I hold his eyes

As my imagination doth spoil.

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But cries the heart as blood from quarry wall:

This broken man, upon the ground he lies,

Yet of his fading footsteps he finds sight,

And hope of healing, hugs the light he spies.

A shattered mirror holds a broken man,

His mind will mend what semblance loving can.

heartbreak

About the Creator

Scott A. Vancil

Writer/actor/director. I write poems, novels, short stories, comic books, and screenplays, in both standard form and iambic pentameter. (FYI: I do not use AI to write. I have never and will never use AI to write. All words come from me.)

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  • Imola Tóth3 months ago

    Congratulations on your runner up placement! 🎉🎉

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

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