The Gaze
Why Standing Still Was Never an Option
Imagine standing still, staring at the place you want to be,
but stubborn feelings refuse to move
until your mindset changes.
We only wrestle with life’s problems
when the weight of suffering grows too heavy.
Why wait?
Growth is only scary
when you realize how simple it truly is.
Once you start,
you’ll find it hard to walk backward.
It’s as easy as one foot in front of the other—
until distractions steal your focus.
How foolish to expect greatness
without risk or effort.
Knowing you have somewhere to go
matters only if you keep going.
Give yourself more paths than ever,
so you’ll find more reasons to fight.
Live relentlessly,
knowing your dream will one day be real—
beautiful or not.
Put yourself first in a life
that has no second place,
and remember:
success is only real
by your definition.
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Comments (9)
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I love this poem! "Give yourself more paths than ever," and "Live relentlessly," great job, and congrats on the Top Story!!
Powerful words—simple yet motivating. I love how you turned movement into a metaphor for growth.
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Almost feels like a weight has been lifted off my own shoulders. Nice job creating that affect! And I really enjoyed this line: -Give yourself more paths than ever, so you’ll find more reasons to fight.- 👍🏼
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Great Congratulations on Top story 😊🌞🌸
I especially love the line “success is only real by your definition.” Powerful words to carry forward. 💪
This was definitely inspirational, sir. ⚡💙 Bill⚡