The Forge Goes Quiet
Finishing is a kind of fire, too.

The day burns down to iron.
I lift the bar from the throat of the hearth
and carry the small comet to the anvil—
a red thought cooling as it travels.
✧ ✧
Hammer says what it always says:
Once, twice, a bright litany of blows.
Each strike erases what the last one meant.
Until the shape agrees to be itself.
✧ ✧
Steam rises at the quench like a brief ghost,
all hiss and vanishing. The water keeps the secret
of a heat it never wore. The room breathes out:
Tongs on the hook, hammer at rest, leather stiffening.
✧ ✧
This is how endings happen here—
not with grief, but with gravity:
a final check for true lines, a palm to the steel
that no longer flinches from touch.
✧ ✧
The color leaves the metal without drama,
passing through orange to memory.
I sweep the scale into a black little drift.
A weather of shed skins.
✧ ✧
When I kill the fire, it doesn’t die—
It returns to its dark among coals,
like a story closing its mouth
So the finished thing can speak.
About the Creator
Milan Milic
Hi, I’m Milan. I write about love, fear, money, and everything in between — wherever inspiration goes. My brain doesn’t stick to one genre.



Comments (1)
Love, love, love that last line zinger.