The Flying House of the Supreme Lord
A Modest Poim of Fantastical Aims

1
The day was darkening into night,
The house was filled with guttering light.
The wind, it blew, it howled with rage,
To be released from out its cage.
2
The house, it shuddered as we shook,
And chill things crept through every nook.
The icy fingers of our fears
Drank longingly our frozen tears.
3
In shadow show, we standing still,
To bend the nighttime to our will.
The sandy turf blew in the gale,
To paint the windows with its tale.
4
The rafters rocked, they ached and groaned,
The boards, they shuddered as they moaned.
The shingles shook, the rooster spun,
And lightning cracked just like a gun.
5
When out the roaring, raging storm,
We saw his form! Oh! Dreadful form,
Emerge from shadow like a wraith,
"To ride the beast!" or so he saith.
6
He climbed atop the shaking roof,
Went up the trellis, hoof by hoof,
And stood upon the apex of
The house when God gave it a shove.
7
And off it flew, he rode the storm,
And drove the house from dusk till morn.
Just like a ship asail the sea,
It was just a nighttime fantasy.
8
And Supreme Lord, we call him still,
Who climbed in o'er the window sill,
And nestled in to spend the night,
Remembering his house of flight.
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Comments (12)
You definitely had me at the title...and then, it just got better and better! Great work!
Great read!
Congratulations on Top Story!!!
Beautifully written!
Beautiful tale in verses!
I could see the actions playing out in your poem as I read it. Visualization is a very good hook for the reader in poetry. I enjoyed reading this, and it made me shiver. A very well written piece.
Congratulations on your beautiful Top Story 🎉
Congratulations on Top Story!!!
Nice poem, love the flow of it.
This is such a well-crafted story.
The supreme Lord I think is I.
I dig it...