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The Flying House of the Supreme Lord

A Modest Poim of Fantastical Aims

By Tom BakerPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - January 2025
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The day was darkening into night,

The house was filled with guttering light.

The wind, it blew, it howled with rage,

To be released from out its cage.

2

The house, it shuddered as we shook,

And chill things crept through every nook.

The icy fingers of our fears

Drank longingly our frozen tears.

3

In shadow show, we standing still,

To bend the nighttime to our will.

The sandy turf blew in the gale,

To paint the windows with its tale.

4

The rafters rocked, they ached and groaned,

The boards, they shuddered as they moaned.

The shingles shook, the rooster spun,

And lightning cracked just like a gun.

5

When out the roaring, raging storm,

We saw his form! Oh! Dreadful form,

Emerge from shadow like a wraith,

"To ride the beast!" or so he saith.

6

He climbed atop the shaking roof,

Went up the trellis, hoof by hoof,

And stood upon the apex of

The house when God gave it a shove.

7

And off it flew, he rode the storm,

And drove the house from dusk till morn.

Just like a ship asail the sea,

It was just a nighttime fantasy.

8

And Supreme Lord, we call him still,

Who climbed in o'er the window sill,

And nestled in to spend the night,

Remembering his house of flight.

My book: Fifty Famous Fables and Folk Tales, Collected From Around the World

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Tom Baker

Author of Haunted Indianapolis, Indiana Ghost Folklore, Midwest Maniacs, Midwest UFOs and Beyond, Scary Urban Legends, 50 Famous Fables and Folk Tales, and Notorious Crimes of the Upper Midwest.: http://tombakerbooks.weebly.com

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  • Angela Shiflettabout a year ago

    You definitely had me at the title...and then, it just got better and better! Great work!

  • Dr. Allen Chererabout a year ago

    Great read!

  • Susan Paytonabout a year ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!!!

  • Sandor Szaboabout a year ago

    Beautifully written!

  • Testabout a year ago

    Beautiful tale in verses!

  • Carol Ann Townendabout a year ago

    I could see the actions playing out in your poem as I read it. Visualization is a very good hook for the reader in poetry. I enjoyed reading this, and it made me shiver. A very well written piece.

  • Komalabout a year ago

    Congratulations on your beautiful Top Story 🎉

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!!!

  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Nice poem, love the flow of it.

  • Testabout a year ago

    This is such a well-crafted story.

  • Ikechukwu Modungwoabout a year ago

    The supreme Lord I think is I.

  • Samuel Wrightabout a year ago

    I dig it...

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