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The Far-Off Country

"Eternity, I'm Coming, Sir!"

By Paul A. MerkleyPublished about a month ago Updated about a month ago 1 min read
Photo Wanderer in Gebirgslandschaft, Alex Gruber LINK: https://www.publicdomainpictures.net/en/free-download.php?image=hiker-in-mountain-landscape&id=291144

Far-off, bright, vague-remembered home sans time sans place sans lies sans night

Though ere creation I (and Thou), yet surging sound preceded me

Scarce trodden paths of nothingness in search of ur-symphonic light

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This blinding recollection floods my brimming, keening, inner sight

Full flowing, coursing, dancing sound before I even came to be

Far-off, bright, vague-remembered home sans time sans place sans lies sans night

3

A teasing, errant mercy daily downward rains upon my plight

Pernicious clues refuse to use a cogent, helpful repartee

Scarce trodden paths of nothingness in search of ur-symphonic light

4

As doggedly I search the ways, I think I’m close, but then not quite

Say will I need more ages here before I may arrive home-free?

Far-off, bright, vague-remembered home sans time sans place sans lies sans night

5

Though there's an adverse energy, I act, aware, in its despite

Full certain that once I succeed I’ll once again be one with She

Scarce trodden paths of nothingness in search of ur-symphonic light

6

“’Tis Thine the luminescent, scorching, searing, radiant face so bright

I’ll live or die to find a way to dance and sing and love with Thee”

Far-off, bright, vague-remembered home sans time sans place sans lies sans night

Scarce trodden paths of nothingness in search of ur-symphonic light

Villanelle

About the Creator

Paul A. Merkley

Mental traveller. Idealist. Try to be low-key but sometimes hothead. Curious George. "Ardent desire is the squire of the heart." Love Tolkien, Cinephile. Awards ASCAP, Royal Society. Music as Brain Fitness: www.musicandmemoryjunction.com

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  • Mark Grahamabout a month ago

    What a poem of a relationship but reads like a poem from an English literature book. Good job.

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