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THE FACE OF MY LOVE

staring at the ceiling

By Margaret BrennanPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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THE FACE OF MY LOVE

Staring at the ceiling

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I stare at the ceiling,

But it’s too dark to see.

The night passes slowly –

He’s not here with me.

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I hear the clock ticking

In time with my heart –

These are my nights,

Since we’ve been apart.

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The face of my love

Is always in sight,

Especially during

Each lonely night.

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I stare at the ceiling,

So dark up above –

All I can see

Is the face of my love.

sad poetry

About the Creator

Margaret Brennan

I am a 78-year old grandmother who loves to write, fish, and grab my camera to capture the beautiful scenery I see around me.

My husband and I found our paradise in Punta Gorda Florida where the weather always keeps us guessing.

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  • Muraliabout a year ago

    I liked the last stanza.

  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli about a year ago

    This is beautiful and sad. It's very human. 🌹🌹🌹

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    So beautiful and yet so sad.

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Damn

  • Skyler Saundersabout a year ago

    This poem cuts to the soul. The yearning is there and the complete feeling of longing for a lover takes root in the mind. I will share.

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