The Eternal Dance of Daybreak
Forever Together and Apart
By Randy DannenfelserPublished about a year ago • 1 min read

In dawn's soft light, they share a rushed glance,
A stolen touch, their love's brief dance.
Two souls apart, yet so near,
Day breaks; shadows arise
Happiness, so brief,
Sadness abides
Yearning grows,
Lone hearts,
Ache.
About the Creator
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