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The Empty Hallway

A moment of dread

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
The Empty Hallway
Photo by Egor Litvinov on Unsplash

Footsteps behind me

I turn to find the hallway

empty, still breathing

Haiku

About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Aarish3 months ago

    I love how you evoke dread with so few words. The contrast between the expected and the empty space creates a lingering chill.

  • Tiffany Gordon3 months ago

    Amazing work! This one has the power to make your heart skip a beat. Go Tim! 💪🏾🎉

  • Kay Husnick3 months ago

    Chilling. Powerful haiku, Tim.

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