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Footsteps behind me
I turn to find the hallway
empty, still breathing
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.




Comments (3)
I love how you evoke dread with so few words. The contrast between the expected and the empty space creates a lingering chill.
Amazing work! This one has the power to make your heart skip a beat. Go Tim! 💪🏾🎉
Chilling. Powerful haiku, Tim.