The Effervescent Darkness
A Haiku
By D. J. ReddallPublished 7 months ago • Updated 7 months ago • 1 min read

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Sparkling cold sweetness
Conquering the dog's mouth heat
Who's an atheist?
About the Creator
D. J. Reddall
I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.



Comments (4)
Nothing beats a cold drink after a hot day. You made me want root beer! Great haiku!
A haiku with bite! Love how the playful twist at the end bubbles up through the chill. Clever and unexpected—just like a sip of something sharp on a hot day.
I know I thank whatever’s out there when that ice water hits the back of my throat. Well done!
I have no idea what you meant here but it's an extremely hot day and I would love some sparkling cold sweetness, lol