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The Effervescent Darkness

A Haiku

By D. J. ReddallPublished 7 months ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read
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Sparkling cold sweetness

Conquering the dog's mouth heat

Who's an atheist?

Haiku

About the Creator

D. J. Reddall

I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.

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  • Silver Daux7 months ago

    Nothing beats a cold drink after a hot day. You made me want root beer! Great haiku!

  • A haiku with bite! Love how the playful twist at the end bubbles up through the chill. Clever and unexpected—just like a sip of something sharp on a hot day.

  • Sean A.7 months ago

    I know I thank whatever’s out there when that ice water hits the back of my throat. Well done!

  • I have no idea what you meant here but it's an extremely hot day and I would love some sparkling cold sweetness, lol

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