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The Echo of Unfinished Love

A Tale of Beauty, Betrayal, and Endless Hope

By The Content CrafterPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
The Echo of Unfinished Love

When I saw you for the first time,

I couldn't believe my own eyes.

Can someone be this beautiful?

I kept asking God again and again.

Your deep blue eyes cast a dark spell on me,

It wasn’t for nothing that I lost my peace.

Since the day I learned the rules of love,

Only one knowledge remains within me—

I can only write your name, and I can only read it.

Let fire rain all around for the world,

May my teary eyes be a refuge for someone in hiding.

I know she is selfish,

She will return again to save herself.

When the need was over, the attitude turned bitter,

When prayers went unanswered, faith was abandoned.

The ones who once called me their God,

Changed their desires, and even changed their God.

Alright, I accept that no one can be dearer than you,

But let’s bet—no one can be more loyal than me.

Your betrayal has cured me completely,

Now I’ll never fall sick with love again.

Whenever I loved, it was always you,

I tried hard to love someone else.

But your love had already claimed me,

So now, don’t even try to save me.

Today, I wander like a lost soul,

Once, I too had dreams of building a world.

Even now, I hold no grudge against you,

For love itself has lost its meaning.

This city is filled with lifeless souls,

Who says it is truly alive?

No one dares to speak against injustice,

But later, everyone has plenty to say.

In my small heart, emotions run deep,

Sleep escapes me, but dreams pour endlessly.

No road, no destination, no strength to walk—

Yet, having you by my side is enough.

Even from afar, you are close to me,

Not family by blood, but still someone special.

Forget those who are completely shattered,

Even today, I still hold onto hope for you.

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  • Alex H Mittelman 10 months ago

    Wonderful tale! Great work!

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