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The Echo I Cannot Still

On Longing That Will Not Fade

By Rebecca A Hyde GonzalesPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
The Echo I Cannot Still
Photo by Ruslan Sikunov on Unsplash

The silence lingers though the night has turned,

I walk the fields where shadows keep their song.

The flame once given cannot be unburned.

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The trees lean inward, as if they had learned

to cradle grief, to carry it along.

The silence lingers though the night has turned.

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The river bends, its waters have discerned

the vows I lost, the words that came out wrong.

The flame once given cannot be unburned.

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The stars look down where once the heavens burned,

their patient gaze remembering the long.

The silence lingers though the night has turned.

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Regret is soil—each root is slowly churned,

a harvest sown by what has made me strong.

The flame once given cannot be unburned,

the silence lingers though the night has turned.

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About the Creator

Rebecca A Hyde Gonzales

I love to write. I have a deep love for words and language; a budding philologist (a late bloomer according to my father). I have been fascinated with the construction of sentences and how meaning is derived from the order of words.

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