Something feels off.
I can't figure it out.
Where will this uncertain path lead?
Do you know, or do I?
Yet, we move forward,
together, no matter what.
When you're with me, everything else fades away.
I forgot that I had grown into an adult and opened the door to a first standard class.
Is it real?
How did you change my life overnight?
Even if I turned the sky into my letter, I couldn't write them all.
So, I'll share it with you.
I'll keep talking day and night, even then our conversation never ends.
So, I'll visit your dreams again.
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Malleswari
A passionate soul with a love for poetry, I explore the beauty of language through poetry and prose. My work span's themes of love, dreams, nature, and the human experience, often drawing inspiration from the world around me.
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Hmmm! A true definition of first love. At first, you may find it difficult to define, but first love can't be forgotten in a hurry. I enjoyed the piece, Malleswari!
"Even if I turned the sky into my letter, I couldn't write them all." I especially loved that line!
Your poem is actually quite quite fascinating <3 Love at first sight is the best feeling in the WORLD! No matter the consequences, a person gets submerged in the love 💖 I, too fall for something ... And It was: POETRY 😄😉💖
Wow, such a hard feeling to have. Wonderful poem. Excellent job describing a very strong and real emotion.
The way you descrive the feeling it's wonderful.