
The Dream That Died
It came to me with open hands,
a future breathing on my skin.
I carried it through crowded days,
believing time would let it in.
I fed it hope and quiet plans,
spoke to it when nights were long.
It listened like it understood,
like it knew where I belonged.
Then cracks appeared in borrowed light,
small doubts I tried to look beyond.
I told myself it would survive,
that wanting made a promise strong.
One morning it was lying still,
no sound left in the shape of it.
The air was heavier to breathe,
as if the world refused to fit.
I did not scream or curse the sky,
I simply sat and felt it end.
Some losses do not ask for tears,
they ask you who you are now then.
I walk on with its shadow near,
a lesson stitched into my days.
A dream can die and still leave proof,
that once I burned in hopeful ways.

About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️


Comments (1)
love how you talk about air getting heavier