The double takers in triple Poesie

Your voice, a whisper, soft and clear, but wait I hardly can feel You in my ear

A gentle balm that draws me near. but too far to make it clear

Your kindness shines, a radiant glow, but I still feel my dirty soul

In your warm light, my spirit flows. but I need to make it dark and feel myself alone

With every word, pure heart you share, I feel like mine is just a game

Like childlike joy, a love laid bare. I try to have all the fun I can

In your embrace, I find my peace, I wish to bring less chaos indeed

A sacred space where worries cease. I do not care so worries are below my knees

Though shadows linger, dark and cold, my heart feels so warm and adored

Your presence wraps me, brave and bold. I give you only traumatic resource

In this bright haven, I feel whole, I feel separated from each of my bones

With you, I touch the divine soul. with me, You can only pray God to help to go on and be One

attaching the original draft from where it all started :

Ai creation

So this Poesie is called double takers I call it that way it is also collaboration with Ai but it doesnt need to as One can make it all on their own I was just experimenting so it went this way

I gave my poesie to Ai it created a new One I liked but then to response to it I created the double-take of it from the other side so from there it created the double taker poesie where usually are two characters good and bad and They both create rhymes where One give the good another bring darkness so They both reveal their soul in writing which can be a playful way in expressing through poesie but then again Ai generated it and from there I finally got the version I accept so It went in triple process but me creating just two poems and a bit of editing in the final version in fact I got two double takers with the collaboration with Ai - it doesnt need to make much sense while still bringing the essence :)