Tries to search me
When I am not around,
Finds me all the way
And barks in a loud sound
I'm Too afraid of dogs
But he is different from all,
Saw him in a shop
Closed in a cage and seeing the walls
A dark truth about people
A deep story seen in his eyes,
Reminding him about his family
And their goodbyes
Started with enemies
But with passing time
Became the best friends
And he became mine
The cutest of all
And the enemy to none,
Everyday excited
Everyday ready to learn
His company and time Is a priceless memory,
I am now fully complete
With his unlimited happiness kits
Thank - You
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This has such a nostalgic energy to it. Slow pace and beautiful in its flow and in the way it brings about a friendship that was unlikely but came about, almost as though it was meant to be. ‘Saw him in a shop Closed in a cage and seeing the walls’ (I love how original this line was, how it said so much in few words. It tells me how lonely that dog was, and how much empathy you held for him there and then. I absolutely loved this! 👌🏽👏🏽♥️🤗