The Descent
where silence holds its breath
Even the garden stayed silent.
The trees—ancient sentinels—
stood rooted,
knowing more than they could say.
The wind no longer moved the branches.
Leaves refused their whispers.
The earth held its breath—
waiting.
He descended,
drawn into the hush
like a moth to a hidden flame.
But he was not afraid.
Shadows thickened.
The air grew too heavy
for song.
In the distance, an iris bloomed,
its petals glistening with ancient light—
a wisdom to be carried through the storm.
The mountain streams stopped their singing.
The wind no longer called his name.
Even Tom Bombadil, had he been near,
would not have danced.
Yet the trees did not bow to the dark.
They stood, unmoved,
bearing witness to the weight of loss.
And in the moment of his fall,
the willows bent their arms toward him—
not to weep,
but to cradle,
to carry his soul gently to the deep.
Their silence was not surrender,
but stillness.
Stillness in the presence
of something eternal.
About the Creator
Rebecca A Hyde Gonzales
I love to write. I have a deep love for words and language; a budding philologist (a late bloomer according to my father). I have been fascinated with the construction of sentences and how meaning is derived from the order of words.


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