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The Deepest Eclipse Of The Night

A beauty to be seen with our Eye’s

By Marie381Uk Published 3 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Deepest Eclipse Of The Night

The sky is burning low and red,

The ocean hums without a sound.

A shadow crowns the sinking sun,

As darkness folds across the ground.

The waves reflect a crimson glow,

A trembling light upon the deep.

It feels as though the world stands still,

And every star has gone to sleep.

I watch the heavens close their eyes,

A circle drawn in silver flame.

The universe becomes a breath,

That has no memory or name.

In moments such as these I find

The quiet truth I try to hide,

That even light can lose its way,

And fall beneath a darker tide.

Yet in the black I hear a pulse,

A steady beat that will not fall.

A spark of life behind the veil,

That answers when I choose to call.

The night becomes a turning wheel,

It spins the dreams I never speak.

It breaks me open just to show

That endings do not make me weak.

For even when the sky is gone,

And shadow swallows every sight,

I feel the promise in the void,

That day will chase the longest night.

So let the fire crown the dark,

And let the ocean glow like wine.

For through eclipse and shadowed waves,

The rising sun will always shine.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham3 months ago

    What a way to catch a sunset and sunrise in a poem.

  • Darla M Seely3 months ago

    This poem is beautiful and well expressed.

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