The Compliment Destroyer
Far Too Good For A Compliment.

I smiled at her sweetly And complimented her shirt
I told her she looked pretty
But I don't think it worked
She looked at me
With a sense of dread
I saw it on her face
It was odd the way she looked at me
Like I was in her way
She almost muttered thank you
I think but I don't know
Cause as soon as the words formed on her lips
She swallowed them back, whole
"I guess I'll walk away then"
It seemed like time to go
She didn't care that I was there If I'd gone, she wouldn't know
I'll never understand it
Those who think they're gold
Their skin that shimmers
Like the sun
Yet their hearts are charred like coal
It makes me ill to think that you or anybody else
Would turn away a girl like me
To feel good about yourself
I hope one day you realize
There's beauty elsewhere, too You can accept a compliment
Without sacrificing you
"I really like your fit today
I think you look so great"
Its not that hard, at least, I think To pretend you reciprocate
So perhaps next time
We share a space inside another room, I won't feel scared to look your way Or say hello to you
About the Creator
Brittany š©·
Hello!
I'm Brittany, and I'm so glad you're here. I'm 24 years old, and I hold a bachelor's degree in Creative Writing and English. Thank you for reading, and feel free to subscribe so you don't miss any stories! (it's freee)!




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