Photo by R. Merlijn on Unsplash
She chased tumbleweed
laughing on the breezy dune
then it turned—chased her
About the Creator
Pamela Williams
“Suppose I had wings like the dawning day and flew across the ocean. Even then your powerful arm would guide and protect me.”
— Psalm 139:9–10, Contemporary English Version (CEV)
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Comments (6)
Fun and terrifying? I love the ambiguity. It captures a child-like joy.
a funny image- and makes me think of shifts in the wind!
I love the switch-up. Nice work, Pamela!
Our histories catch us up! This is great.
Love the image choice in this one too. Love the subtitle. It gives me a lot to desire. Oh my gosh. I love the ghostly ending to this. The fear that she must be feeling. Being chased when it turned. Pamela. This is actually really really good. I am going to have to reach down and add those insights 🤗❤️
Hahahahhaha that took a turn. Loved your poem!