The Call
After Robert Hayden's "Those Winter Sundays"
Sunday mornings spoke long and early,
the blueblack cold imperceptibly thinned
by the labor of his weekdays. Though the air
thanked him, the home was indifferent to love.
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With cracked hands, my father blazed fires,
splintering the freeze. His call would rise,
breaking past angers inside the stairs; the rooms
drove out austere loneliness—a moment.
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He ached from wintry work. As fireplaces roared,
chronic dawns whispered to him. Sundays
chatted most, the leisure of a man who had chased
away death.
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I never heard the words. The call
arrived at my door void of preamble.
I never hugged the ghost of that
unforgiving house.
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Thank you for reading! This is part of a series of poetic emulations, where I take a poem I love and either write an answer, a continuation, or something new inspired by it.
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Mackenzie Davis
“When you are describing a shape, or sound, or tint, don’t state the matter plainly, but put it in a hint. And learn to look at all things with a sort of mental squint.” Lewis Carroll
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Oof, this hit me so hard! You did such an excellent job at this!