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The Call

After Robert Hayden's "Those Winter Sundays"

By Mackenzie DavisPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
The Call
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Sunday mornings spoke long and early,

the blueblack cold imperceptibly thinned

by the labor of his weekdays. Though the air

thanked him, the home was indifferent to love.

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With cracked hands, my father blazed fires,

splintering the freeze. His call would rise,

breaking past angers inside the stairs; the rooms

drove out austere loneliness—a moment.

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He ached from wintry work. As fireplaces roared,

chronic dawns whispered to him. Sundays

chatted most, the leisure of a man who had chased

away death.

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I never heard the words. The call

arrived at my door void of preamble.

I never hugged the ghost of that

unforgiving house.

        

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Thank you for reading! This is part of a series of poetic emulations, where I take a poem I love and either write an answer, a continuation, or something new inspired by it.

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Mackenzie Davis

“When you are describing a shape, or sound, or tint, don’t state the matter plainly, but put it in a hint. And learn to look at all things with a sort of mental squint.” Lewis Carroll

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 years ago

    Oof, this hit me so hard! You did such an excellent job at this!

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