The Boy Who Never Flew
Poetry on Consequences
This is for Vocal's This Is How I Remember It challenge and Poppy's #13 prompt.
This is not history, but tragedy, remembered by Dedalus, who remained.
Heed the call...or someone bears the toll. For memory blurs--in grief.
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They say--
He fell by force
Of a summer's harsh gale
But I do recall this last flight--
Do I?
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He stood
Feathers unfurled
The ledge behind his heels.
Peered at the sun through lidless eyes--
And flew.
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He tried.
But flight was naught.
Shattered bones and wing wax.
Left under the scorching sun's rays
To melt.
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A lie.
There was no heat
But false hope in great wings
And a call not to place one's faith
In wax.
🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽
I called
But did he hear?
Or spread his waxen wings
With no care that the scorching sun
Would foil?
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Original poem by Michelle Liew. AI tags are coincidental.
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.


Comments (10)
Ah, dear Icarus...you had a fine idea, just the wrong ingredients.
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Impressive take on both challenges!🤗I love your closing life application.
Great job! I especially adore this stanza: "A lie. There was no heat But false hope in great wings And a call not to place one's faith In wax."
That was so sad. Loved your take on the prompt!
Love the unique perspective and the morose tone. Well done!
It’s always so much harder for those who are left behind. Poor Daedalus. Great poem, Michelle!
I think you upped the level of tragedy from the original story, lifting it from Fable to true drama
I love the way you’ve told the Icarus story through Dedalus’s eyes.
Sad and tragic , emote those emotion