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The Boy Who Never Flew

Poetry on Consequences

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 6 months ago Updated 6 months ago 1 min read
The Boy Who Never Flew
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This is for Vocal's This Is How I Remember It challenge and Poppy's #13 prompt.

This is not history, but tragedy, remembered by Dedalus, who remained.

Heed the call...or someone bears the toll. For memory blurs--in grief.

🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽

They say--

He fell by force

Of a summer's harsh gale

But I do recall this last flight--

Do I?

🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽

He stood

Feathers unfurled

The ledge behind his heels.

Peered at the sun through lidless eyes--

And flew.

🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽

He tried.

But flight was naught.

Shattered bones and wing wax.

Left under the scorching sun's rays

To melt.

🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽

A lie.

There was no heat

But false hope in great wings

And a call not to place one's faith

In wax.

🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽

I called

But did he hear?

Or spread his waxen wings

With no care that the scorching sun

Would foil?

🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽🪽

Original poem by Michelle Liew. AI tags are coincidental.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Novel Allen6 months ago

    Ah, dear Icarus...you had a fine idea, just the wrong ingredients.

  • Mother Combs6 months ago

    🩷

  • Impressive take on both challenges!🤗I love your closing life application.

  • Poppy 6 months ago

    Great job! I especially adore this stanza: "A lie. There was no heat But false hope in great wings And a call not to place one's faith In wax."

  • That was so sad. Loved your take on the prompt!

  • Dana Crandell6 months ago

    Love the unique perspective and the morose tone. Well done!

  • Lana V Lynx6 months ago

    It’s always so much harder for those who are left behind. Poor Daedalus. Great poem, Michelle!

  • Sean A.6 months ago

    I think you upped the level of tragedy from the original story, lifting it from Fable to true drama

  • Sandy Gillman6 months ago

    I love the way you’ve told the Icarus story through Dedalus’s eyes.

  • Mariann Carroll6 months ago

    Sad and tragic , emote those emotion

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