Poets logo

The Astronaut's Haiku

An Elemental Journey

By John AtkinsonPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

(earth)

man climbs into craft

says farewell to solid ground

counts down to zero

(fire)

intermingling fuels

spark applied to set ablaze

power of titans

(air)

man and craft ascend

crudely shoving air aside

until there is none

(water)

man and craft descend

dangling under silken threads

until ocean's kiss

art

About the Creator

John Atkinson

Artist, writer, middle-aged polymath, husband, friend, brother. One who is at the same time enraptured with and humbled by life and the World.

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments

There are no comments for this story

Be the first to respond and start the conversation.

Sign in to comment

    Find us on social media

    Miscellaneous links

    • Explore
    • Contact
    • Privacy Policy
    • Terms of Use
    • Support

    © 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.