
Nomad woman walks
the idled pale between
the city’s concrete caverns—
)⋆~→~⋆→ shrish—frsk—crunch…
Shh—
the hush
and ever-wait
of Autumn hunt:
a heartbeat gnawing at
her wishroot while
she roams.
*
Nomad woman is
a wilding spurned
of yearning’s bloom
and forest’s fruit—
a song of must,
forbidden, and
still sleeping in
the loam.
(eat, eat, eat…)
*
Nomad woman is
mosaic,
pining,
stillfire, pieced
together—she
is drifting, aimless,
like a leaf—
though her arrow keeps
its fine-point fixed upon
her daydream’s frail
and meager wings—
her anchor arm,
and drawing arm
forever tethered to
the open arc—in waiting—
of her bow.
)⋆~→~⋆→ shhhk—twng—thrummm…
(the air around her tightens as
she breathes the string
of tension in
and whispers through
her cheek: )
"Come hither, dove—
fly home to me
so that I might forge rather
than feast upon
thy lark-like,
cherub bones,
and be fain to catch thou not—
perhaps the scent
of thy sweet marrow might
unbeast me."
)⋆~→~⋆→ thrrrp—creeek—thwip!
(miss—
Nomad woman’s left
with only whistle-purr
as mourning flock
takes flutter from
the street:
)⋆~→~⋆→ fwrrr—frwrrr—fweep!
and the vagabond within her is
forsaken—
a shadow on
the empire’s edge.
*
Nomad woman is no less
the pulse of Artemis
than she’s become
the battle-queen, Athena—
rawr—rawr—rawr!
the bloodsong in
her war-marred heart:
the quest for poetry
and kismet as
she wanders without home.
She is steel-souled,
hungered,
tortured to the point of break
and ruin, yet
she raids,
and roars,
and rises in her fury—may
the world afore her have
God’s mercy.
"Do I frighten thou, dear thing?
Is my strength the reason
little fawns
evade me?
I do not wish to eat thou, I
shall be thy sworn
protector, this:
I promise."
*
Nomad woman knows
the way of hunt and gather is
an art form—one long lost
to herd of farmers’
sheep.
For this,
her craving for the chase has deemed
her essence a
rogue monster.
(meat, meat, meat…)
*
But at the core of all
the primal burn
within her, one
de
si
der
a
tum
thrums—
a drumbeat not to brandish fang
of grizzlies but
to bear a tender,
swaddled beauty—
one of newness, one
of love—
and for this,
Nomad woman hunts.
"Come hither, sweet, small sparrow—
to cage thou is
to carve thee, and
to carve thy supple meat
from mine own hip shall see
you flower from
my rust—should thou find the will
to trust me."
*
)⋆~→~⋆→ shrish—frsk—crunch…
Nomad woman wields her bow and arrow
with
the prowess of a tempest hurling
javelins of light,
and yet
she searches, still—
a creature chained to fickle winds
and wishes.
)⋆~→~⋆→ shhhk—twng—thrummm…
She advances,
stalking clouds with nets
and tiger eyes—
two amber suns
that cling
and grasp
to slivered glints
of new moons’ ghosts—
)⋆~→~⋆→ thrrrp—creeek—thwip!
And, like this,
Nomad mother bids the waning crescent
double as
her waiting cradle and
her crossbow.
Sleep, sleep, sleep, my little cub—
until the hunt is done and I
have found thee.
🏹🤍
About the Creator
Gina C.
Poet | Author | Architect of Worlds
Sowing stories rooted in culture, origin, metamorphosis, resilience, language & love via fantasy, myth, magical realism & botanical prose
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Comments (16)
Back for the best of reasons. Super congrats to you Gina C.! You're going to need a bigger trophy case soon! So happy to see your name up there!
Congratulations on the very well deserved win. The flow of this poem is extraordinary. Rich, tactile imagery throughout, and so much rich, sumptuous language. I also enjoyed the way you wove different mythologies though the lines. Wonderful read!
This is so gorgeous and uniquely crafted, I love it so much!! So deserving of the win!
Congratulations on your win!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Your nomad woman really does it all-- from bow to cradle-- congratulations on winning -- you have written an intriguing poem.
🏹Love how you set the scene in the beginning. We saw her then we saw her surroundings. Dazzled us with the sounds. Let the hunt begin. 🏹 'Wilding spurned Of yearnings bloom' a very beautiful line. Wow. It even touches on a narrative. 🏹Oh the spoken words... 'Lark - like cherub bones'. The description— so breathtaking— the hunger. But the spoken words. You got into character. Deep inside her soul, that's where you went. I don't know why I got excited at 'rawr rawr rawr' 🏹'Rogue monster'. Afterwards the 'meat, meat, meat' was so satisfying. I am just utterly speechless. This was so very well, thought through. Gripping for a poem. Intense. A deeply satisfying journey. An adventure. Congratulations on your challenge win, Gina 🤗❤️🖤
This. Is. So. AMAZING, Gina! What a gorgeous piece—visceral, emotional, and intoxicating to read! Congrats on a well deserved win! xoxo
Congratulations on the Top Story. The huntress will find her match, one that is worthy and perhaps swaddle a baby in her arms.
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
So happy to see you are back, Gina. Beautiful work and surely a poem I will remember. "Nomad woman knows the way of hunt and gather is an art form" - I just love this so much ❣ Congratulations on your top story!👏👏👏
Congratulations on Top Story, well deserve!!!
Heyyy my sweet Red Partner! I was so happy to see something new from you. Your poem was soooo powerful. I loved it so much!
Dear Gc ~ So glad to see you back within the VillageFold ~ You've always been a profound presence here. Best, j.k.in.l.a.
Love the image and the picture you paint with your words
I could not be a nomad. I could not hunt for livestock food. This is a great entry to the poetry hunt Challenge 🤩