The ache inside—no one can heal
When heartbeat stops—a fading feel
The silent cries when heat bursts out
When all you desire is a painful shout
The pale skin while the blood turns black
When smile turns down and begins to crack
The world fights you but you can't fight through
When the story of every single villain seems true
The cloth tear-proof and your eyes turn blue
When the dead soul of yours doesn't find a clue
The breath fading away, turning 'you' into 'stone'
When no one's there to hold you when you're alone!
The time when every speck hates you
You need one person, that 'ONE' who's true
Their tissue can dissolve all your pains in a while
Their presence blooms you and makes you smile
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Ready to let my writing bloom!
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Comments (15)
So sweet. That one and every pain dissolves ❤
Flawless rhymes, flawless writing style, flawless formatting choices! Amazing work as ALWAYS, Maryam!👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾💗
What a beautiful poem Maryam. It is full of emotion and feeling. Absolutely lovely. Well done!!!
Yess indeed. Your words are so true and relatable. Lovely poem.
Amazing
beautiful!
The ending makes me grateful for the few people that can comfort us just right! :) Blessings!
The person who is deserving of love, and that is what we all are looking for. Well Done!!
Okay, this one just hits different! The lines, the emotions everything is just too good! Hope each of us finds that one person who is true to us! <3. Loved it Maryam!!!❤️
Beautifully written This poem captures the deep pain and longing for a true connection. Thank you for sharing such a poignant piece.
This one hits deep! This poem really taps into those feels! It’s like a rollercoaster of emotions, but then, bam! You hit that sweet note of having someone true to turn everything around. Powerful stuff! ✨😊💖
So perfect! We all deserve the one who is true. This is an outstanding piece
Ohh! This is haunting yet beautifully expressed. It carries a deep sense of sorrow, pain, and isolation, everything! written with such depth. Incredible! It starts with an aching void and striking visuals of pain. The last stanza shifts the tone slightly, at least there is someone. This was very deep and painful. Amazing! And did you make this drawing? 👏
All of us deserve someone like that in our lives. Loved your poem!
Amazing Miss