That one 'bee'
Imma kill that bee 💀
Could anything be more annoying?
Than a 'BEE' sticking up my nose and enjoying!
[My sweet yet worst night]
The Serenity of the Winter Nights, the silent hush
The only sound of relentless ticking—no rush
Feels like I'll relax after 8 months of sound
My first winter night looked so profound
The softness of blanket, the musky warm smell
With my hair open, on my bed, I fell
Huhhhh! Finally, the silence of the world
No talking, no chirping of the bird
I fell asleep, 'Day-Dreaming' in my dream
The perfect moments, no frequency no beam
"Buzzz, Buzzzzz", 'What's that sound in the tree?'
"Hehehehe—wake up you little shit, it's me"
My childhood enemy, the worst drama
Everything but, I hate this trauma
That only 'BEE' with the worst sound
"Just one time in my hand, I'll grave You to the ground!!"
Practicing every single karaoke in my face
My head's a marathon and IT has to win the race
I did shower, I'm clean—I do not stink
Gritted teeth— I could see IT at every blink
It ruined my night, my dream, my tree
Get in my hand, Imma kill you freaky BEE
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Author's note;
I wrote the entire poem just to know that it's not called 'BEE' but a 'FLY'. My brain wasn't working well. Ignore it, please
That fly ruined my night! I thought to ruin IT through my poem. 'cause I couldn't get IT in my hand
Do you maybe have a memory like that? A 'That one BEE(Fly)*?'
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I just love this so much, I enjoyed every line. Every joke, and every unexpected rhyme and thought. I am glad that fly bothered you, if it hadn’t, this masterpiece wouldn’t be sitting here on Vocal. Well done my friend 👏🏽👌🏽 this was a diamond 💎
Hahaha! Well not fly but definitely bee. Bees are my worst nightmares. One day I was heading to the temple filled with bees and just then one of them stung my foot. I swear I was the only crying mess there. Well for me flies are better🤧. Your poem by the way is so humourful but when you wrote bees, I thought you are brave!!
This poem is hilariously relatable!🤭 That mix of the peaceful winter night vibe with the ultimate nemesis—a buzzing “bee” (well, fly!)—is spot on. The buildup is so cozy, only for it to be ruined by the relentless buzz, which every one of us can feel down to our bones. It’s funny how the enemy was revealed to be a fly in the end, like the ultimate betrayal of a bad night! And yes, I totally get that “one BEE” (or fly!) memory—don’t we all?😆
Hahahahahahhaa singing karaoke in my face! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 And yesssss, I've had sooo many experiences with flies and it's sooo annoying!
Haha! This is truly a wonderful poem; that fly must have died of embarrassment by now. It troubled you so much that you ended up writing a poem about it—this is amazing! It's such a fantastic poem, and I really loved the rhyming. Did you stay up all night because of it? I'm sorry mere pass to makhi ko lekar koi esi yaadgar lamha nhi hai, jo mein share karun, yah to normal hai life mein makhiyao se samna to har rij hota hai 😃😃
They are the worst!!! I really dislike them when they are trying to fly on my food 😫😫😫. Love this poem.