
Ocean phosphorescence
On the beach at night:
beautiful incandescence
of phosphorescence
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Harper Lewis
I'm a weirdo nerd who’s extremely subversive. I like rocks, incense, and all kinds of witchy stuff. Intrusive rhyme bothers me.
I’m known as Dena Brown to the revenuers and pollsters.
MA English literature, College of Charleston
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💖Your use of tautology was what my eyes drew to first. I like how you reflect just how infinite the light across the ocean is, as though it is mirroring the stars in the sky. How deeply calming 😍🤗♥️
I suppose I’m breaking haiku law—and I’m a non-rhymer.
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