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That First Day

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By Esala GunathilakePublished 2 months ago • 1 min read
That First Day
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Everything happened on that first day I saw you,

Is still stuck in my mind,

My damsel, what did you try to say,

By stretching your eyes to me

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Whose are you where do you stay,

How can I get into it,

The question, when and where,

Shall we encounter again,

hurts my heart a lot

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I will amass my yummy feelings,

And seal it in the sky,

The air will carry it to you,

Through a charming song,

If my eyes see you once more,

I will smile on that day again

.........................................

Everything happened on that first day I saw you,

Is still stuck in my mind,

My damsel, what did you try to say,

By stretching your eyes to me

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About the Creator

Esala Gunathilake

I am an enthusiastic writer who feel the sense of humanity. Thus, I can write stanzas, short stories, novels, articles and blogs as well. I am a blog contributor for the Ananda College Engineer's Ink student chapter website.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Emos Sibu Poriei (Kaya)2 months ago

    Nice!

  • angela hepworth2 months ago

    Lovely work! Nice to see you back!!

  • LUCCIAN LAYTH2 months ago

    The repetition at the beginning and end creates emotional resonance ,it feels like the speaker is trapped in a tender moment that never fades.

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