Thank you PAIN !
See the pain that bites you a different way ...
"Thank you" to all the pains I got
Made me plead and brought near to God
Joy you're not good as I thought
Being happy, why I took two shots?
Why I ask his forgiveness only in PAIN?
Why not at the time when it was happy lane?
Stop it here! And ask a question to you
You're lost in world like a kid in zoo
But you know his mercy and blessings all?
He forgives you at your single call!
Authors notes ;
This poem resonates to the true feeling of everyone in the times of despair and unease. One connects with God and ask his blessings only when one feels devastated. But the wholeness of GOD Almighty is infinite that HE forgives everyone just in a single call!
What do you think about the poem? Please share your ideas and you can always give me tips to improve my writing <3
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Ready to let my writing bloom!
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Comments (3)
This poem is a prayer to thank God both in good and difficult times. Amen
Wow, your words resonate with the ups and downs of life. You express how pain can lead to growth and a deeper connection with the divine so beautifully. The contrast between joy and pain is so moving, and your imagery of feeling lost like a child in a zoo hits home. The message of divine mercy and forgiveness at the end is incredibly powerful. You've done an amazing job! Wishing you all the best on your writing journey!
Just Amazing! The way pains connect us to God is just mesmerizing. The line "Made me plead and brought near to God" felt real.